rood dudes drawings! Critiques please?

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Here is a bunch of drawings done by me :smiley: tell me what you think!

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Well, if I were you i’d invest in a scanner. As for the drawings, there quite good. Your shading could use quite a bit of work though. Whether intentional or not, the shading just kind of starts and stops.

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also made the following song, It sounds in my head kinda like Falling In Reverse-The drug in me is you

Here it is:

Im so,
sick and tired
of the liars
always lying to me

Theyre always making up these storys
that they hope ill believe

They keep on dreaming
their minds steaming
teaming with thought

hoping they will get away
but they always get caught

Sing: Take away theeeee pain
Scream: so take away the pain!
sing: and let your heart drain
scream: cuz its still pumping away!

Chorus:I dont wanna lie to you
i hope youll understand
I dont want to be together
I just want to be my owwwn man.

do my
eyes decieve me
or are you believing
everything that i say

i guess your crazy
somewhat lazy
or maybe just ashamed

you think im stupid
probably dumb
or maybe just insane

hoping you will get away
but you know the name of the game

sing: so take away the pain
scream: take away the pain
sing: dont feel so ashamed
scream: that your hearts still pumping away!

Chorus:I dont wanna lie to you
i hope youll understand
I dont want to be together
I just want to be my owwwn man.

so go away
scream: go awayyyy!
Make me happeeey
scream: thats all im worth to you.

done :smiley:

comment BELOW :smiley:

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im into a sense or generalized shading, trying to go for both the light and dark aspects of it. you know like a lit window, with the shadows around it…stuff like that. so i put alot of shadows and alot of back shading :stuck_out_tongue: thanks for the critique i will work on it :smiley:

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http://www.heritems.info/avatar3.jpgWhether intentional or not, the shading just kind of starts and stops.

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im into a sense or generalized shading, trying to go for both the light and dark aspects of it. you know like a lit window, with the shadows around it…stuff like that. so i put alot of shadows and alot of back shading :stuck_out_tongue: thanks for the critique i will work on it

In that case, you might try inking to really make that clear.

Whether intentional or not, the shading just kind of starts and stops.

Ummmm… Yeah… That’s what I just said…

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heh :] anyways, im going to get back to some more :smiley: i guess i should draw a lot of other pics