Very nice work. My only crit is about the flooring, the scale of the parquet is a little bit small. Which renderer did you use?
great image!
some infos ?
Strange, i added some info… Blender, Yafaray (near 5 hours on Intel Core2 Quade Q8300 2500 GHz)
I agree with the comment about the floor, it makes the armchairs look huge. Also the sunlight in the left of the image kinda distracts the eye from the center , where the main focus is supposed to be. Everything else looks great, congratulations.
You did a great job with the leather but the cushions on the bottom are a little too wrinkled for chairs that look pretty new.
Thanks for your opinion, next work will be better.)
I assume you used procedural textures to make the wrinkles? Just make them a little bit larger at the same strength and that should do the trick.
Great work, but I still think there’s potential left for improvement composition-wise. The corner of the room & the left armchair are 2 centered, imho. Intuitiveley, I’d recomend shifting the cam to the right a bit, maybe lowering it also, all those viewing-angles are pretty much the same now. We’re looking at both walls from pretty much the same angle. Same applies to floor & ceiling. That’s just boring & dull, composition-wise. I really don’t wanna be rude, don’t missunderstand me please. Am just trying to tell ya where I see room for improvement.
I actually like the sunlight on the left side ludemi84 mentioned. It has unused potential, too. Shift that more towards the center, give it more screenspace, make it cover the interesting parts of the geometry, the left armchir 4 example. Maybe give it some (more) structure, somethin’ like the shadow of some of those embroidered curtains or so).
greetings, Kologe
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Thanks, i`ll try make new render, taking into account comments.
I’d say it’s almost photoreal, except the wrinkles seem to be the same on both armchairs.
yep, alt+D) hackwork, but I’m so lazy
I really like this, looks very real, the only thing i would say is lighting look a little dull and the spot of sun light look’s out of place. playing around with the sun many bring real warmth in to the image and maybe up the exposure. I love the little ship would like to see that in a storm scene!!
Nice Work!
Interestingly arranged interior, good render. I like the leather furniture. Cool themes connected with life on the water. Inspiring work.
amazing work. It looks like yafaray is a pretty good renderer.
Very good models. Only as a colleague mentioned a little small floor texture. the rest of the super