bon, je viens de mettre des ombres et améliorer un peu les animations, quel boulot, pfffff
enjoy 
For a start, it’s good for a beginner. However, the entire animation was stiff from the start. The landscape at the start of the video looks almost transparent. You can see the part of the landscape at the 0:02 mark behind the building. Are the trees being reflected of the grass or is the ground transparent too on that side.
The camera limit needs to extended as the car goes down the road. That way it doesn’t look like its constantly going over a cliff. The glass shattering could use some work.
Today, i have just rigify the character, maybe i will do better animation in the future…
i thought that grass through the car and the building was a bug ?
i made my PC work a lot of nights for 1 minute of animation :rolleyes:
It wasn’t a bug. That’s for sure. There is always room for improvement. Just work a little bit harder.
You’re off to a good start, tontonguimu! I know how much work it is to plan out multiple scenes and shots, and to complete a project. As XeroShadow mentioned, for your next project you could try to improve the animation. If character animation is what you’re interested in, try to focus on that. If you have trouble with that, then I would suggest working to improve the camera animation instead.
Did you use a particle system for the glass breaking? I would suggest using the fracture tool. Here is a tutorial that may be helpful. It’s in English instead of French, but hopefully it won’t be too difficult to understand:
One last suggestion, for your next project try to give yourself less work to do. If possible, just try to keep everything in one setting. This will give you less scenes to have to create, and more of your energy can go into creating a very refined animation. I hope this helps you!
ty candy, i will try to improve animation in my future video… i have rigify the character for that.
My video is a copy of an episode of tv show chuck (Season 5 episode 12), that’s why i have multiply plans…
Thank you for advice, i understand english enough to use tutorial
see you