school project - animation

hi,

this is a school project.
this is not finished yet, but i like to show you the pre-render.


Hi !

The modeling and textures are good, and I also like the very “cartoon” feeling of the scene. But it looks a bit empty, maybe you could add something like a big armchair in the right corner, something like this, for the final scene !

I like how you did the floorboards! I can see the repeated boards, but they are randomly placed enough to not be initially visible.
I can imagine a great scene from this…

thanks for your comments :stuck_out_tongue:

3D animation as a school project?Coool!
I wish my school would let us do that!
Looks great so far though!

Will the animation tell a story?