Screenplay (need critique)

Hello! I made this screenplay titled “The Hole” recently that I plan to turn into a short film. It was inspired from the idea that sometimes we find ourselves in a situation (or a “hole”) that we can’t get ourselves out of and in order to do so we must think more about others than ourselves and our own wants. Story is the most important part, however, so I wanted to get some critique on any part of the story and any aspect of story telling. Any type of critique is welcomed.
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***I know its pretty long but there is no deadline for this project just on my free time. Hope you like it!