I’ve been working on a sea-serpent/eel/worm/goa-uld thing. Started yesterday when I doodled up a sketch on a Post-it note during a slow moment at work! I got the inspiration after looking at a book on the making of the new Beowulf movie. No head yet!
I’ve been looking at some reference photos of snakes, but the idea for this animal is that it has a mammal-like ribcage (the bulging part), a snake-like back end, fishy fins, and a leaf-shaped tail. No arms.
It looks like you’ve got some problems with the subsurf. When doing organic modding (like you are here) try to use a little tris as possible. Also, some wireframes would be helpful.
The concept is cool though. The fins on the sides look pretty good.
At the moment, the fins are not attached, but eventually they will be. I tend to model different body parts as separate objects and then eventually join them together.