Seashore Message

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This is my fav render batch till now!

New Reformed Image:

Seashore%20Message2
Seashore%20Message23840×1600 3.53 MB

Seashore%20Message
Seashore%20Message1920×1080 1.9 MB

Seashore%20Message%20Close-Up
Seashore%20Message%20Close-Up1920×1080 2.26 MB

Seashore%20Message%20Cork
Seashore%20Message%20Cork1920×1080 1.49 MB

Seashore%20Message%20Waves
Seashore%20Message%20Waves1920×1080 833 KB

Hope you like it!:wink:

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I really like the colors and composition, but if you were aiming for realism, the ground looks weird. It looks like clay, but it’s still too glossy. The glass texture is also too complex. Now it looks like there is water inside and it’s in moving around.

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Same here. Very lovely colors and mood. The ocean looks great. But the sand looks like rocks, too solid. The glass is interesting. The cork texture is off, drink some wine :wine_glass: and take a look at natural cork texture.

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