Semidetached houses - My first commercial project

Hi Guys,

in march this year i came up with the idea to learn blender to broaden my horizon a bit. But only two months later i was already hired to do a visualization for an architect. So i tried to make the best out of it and started learning by doing, as always ; )

In the end i came up with what you’re seeing. Finally it’s not the result i personally wanted but thankfully the customer liked it. The schedule was unfortunately to short to make the windows transparent, so that you can see the room with its furniture inside. It also would have been nice if there were a few more garden furniture and plants on the terraces etc – but there weren’t enough good models on blendswap so far ; )

Bla bla bla … hope you like it too - and there is always space for some constructive criticism ; )



The grass texture outshines everything in the scene; I’m curious how you did it.

@danilius: The grass texture is just a high res image with bump mapping. The only trick i did, was to paint along the grass texture edges with a grass brush in photoshop. That gives you the illusion that the whole grass is made out of those little blades of grass ; )

Apart from the windows :wink: my only criticism is that the colours of grass and roof are a bit too shiny, they kind of kill other colours in the scene.

Completely agreed on the grass: it looks very good!

That’s what sells the grass then - it’s really a very good texture and a very effective trick!

Hi, congratulations for your first commercial Blender project! I spent so much more time understanding Blender until I was able to make anything worthwhile… but again, it was in the days of blender 2.4 so maybe the new UI is easyer :wink: (I’m just trying to make myself feel better)
Your first attempt looks very good. The wood and grass textures are nice and the image looks cheery and happy the way architect’s clients like to have them. As you know already the glass is the toughest to get right and is the first thing you notice in a project like this. It’s mainly about what it reflects. Transparency will improve it but also making it a bit darker and less blueish - in fact like the conservatory windows.
Now I’ll come to the constructive criticism :slight_smile:
In the elevated view, I think the horizon line is to low, it should be at the point perspective lines are horizontal, about the top of the top floor windows. I like your background image though.
The white walls are a bit too bright and flat and some edges are not visible on my screen. The umbrella also.
The roof and floor textures have a good tiling but appear too perfect, you could try mixing some large scale noise or other types of textures to the main tile. The paving is a bit too gray, even if the actual material to be used is reffered to as “grey” it won’t necessarily look gray in sunlight - you can make it a bit warmer. The wood textures show bad tiling and look a bit overscaled as well. For the wood panelling for instance there is a vertical line and a dark dot that are too obvious and could be edited out in the texture file.

I am trying to develop a blog on architectural rendering with Blender, maybe you can find something helpful here: Blendermama
I would be glad for any suggestions on improving it from people interested in this particular subject.

Oana

Thanks to all of you, who have given me some legitimate critics. Luckily the customer wanted some additional corrections, so i’ve had the chance to include your notes and my last wishes aswell. Here are the results: