texture photo modeling - unless you’re going to allow for very close viewing of the racks, you can go a long way with photos of the object, suck onto a lower res model - such as if you have a pc box, youd have the box shape, and if there was any funky large cutouts you would model those, then take a good photo from the front with a little shadow casting as possible, then front project the UVs, attached the image as its texture, and render that. works quite well if you take the time to sort it out, and its faster than trying to accurately build everything.
lighting - the lighting you have at the moment is extremely unconvincing. you need to take note of where the actual lights in the real room are, and then copy it. theres no visible light in the very centre of your scene, but all the specular hotspots say there it. this is glaringly wrong. the second image has tube lighting, which is much better, but they clearly arn’t lighting the scene. you’ve got a lamp spaced in the middle of the rear set, and ive no idea what in the closer set. get some area lights exactly the same shape as those tubes, or investigate emitting materials in luxrender.
luxrender - my god thats slow! six hours? at that size? with those materials? theres some serious optimisations you can do for this scene im sure. but you’ll have to read through the lux manuals to get somewhere. i only know yafaray so can’t suggest anything
materials - the hotspots you have on the walls are some unknown realworld material. turn the spec way way down, and either photograph the real wall for a texture to put on it, or get something off cgtextures.com its screaming out for something more than a simple colour swatch /high spec
reference - i would highly recomment taking some photo of the scene - expecially one from a similar view point as your render, so when you’re working from home you have a clear picture. memory is usually pretty poor at details, but usually gets the overall picture right. so you’ve probably got a close scene, but theres al sorts of stuff different… are there light switches? power sockets? leads and cables that are lying around not part of the work you’re doing? how about junk on the tables? skirting boards?
i think you can make something quite respectable, and you’re half way there, so just keep at it. 