shark


(kaktuswasse) #1

hey, made a little shark this afternoon.
http://lysithea.sunn.de/shark.jpg
here is a little anim as well:
http://lysithea.sunn.de/shark.avi

cya henrik

P.S.: yes i know, he has no t(h)eeths…


(rogerm3d) #2

Isnt this the wrong place to be posting this?
More like in wip or finished works. :frowning:
Still a cool fish though. Top fin looks maybe a little too tall and underside looks too white, allmost glowing.


(kaktuswasse) #3

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppsss… SORRY , please move!!!


(kaktuswasse) #4

well, wip would have been better maybe, but this is better then elysiun chat :wink:


(kaktuswasse) #5

here is a new anim (often updated) http://lysithea.sunn.de/shark2.avi

cya henrik


(Andy Goralczyk) #6

hey, that’s a cool shark. very nicely done. :smiley:
.andy


(Gr8RedShark) #7

cool! he looks like he’s maybe eaten a few too many divers though. I really like the texturing
:slight_smile:


(benstabler) #8

It would be nice to have a watery background, and mabey some fish around it. It looks… strange… on its own.

:wink:


(S68) #9

Cool,

second anim is really nice… but too fast :o !

Stefano


(kaktuswasse) #10

ok, here is a new anim. Still not perfect but much better imho:
http://lysithea.sunn.de/shark4.avi (121kb, so you modem guys can get it as well :P)
cya guys


(kaktuswasse) #11

anybody?


(slikdigit) #12

hello!
I’d change the following about the animation:
1- since the shark is the focus of interest have it be in the frame longer-.
2- ditto, have it swim towards the camera, thus filling more of the frame
3-the flick of the tail is too fast., for such a big fish
4- ditto on the ‘bounce back’ of the body
5- you might want to slow down the speed

other than that you’re lookin good! next up: some background (maybe a bluegradeint world)and some mist to get that underwater atmosphere.