Its my very first ever project using Blender to animate a movie. Its called Dream, and is a nightmare on a Lunar Orbiter in space.
Its part of a larger project, the character has this dream and this is what it is. Its a but rough here and there but I hope people like it
I terms of direction (camera angles etc) it’s pretty good.
There are some things I think you could have improved on in rendering, e.g the normals artefacts on the door,
but when door fell off and the person fell into space, I thought it was very good and conveyed a sense of panic well 
This is quite good. It has great potential. I think that the camera motion was a bit non-human (too smooth). Overall there are multiple things that could be improved. The modeling in very good. Add some textures, compositing and fix normals, and this would be an amazing piece.
Also, you said it took 24 hours to render this. If you have a slow PC, try rendering @ 720p instead of 1080p and turn down some render settings like AA samples and add motion blur.
Thanks everyone, I rendered this on a laptop, because I’ve got nothing else. And it was at 720p. 
But thanks for the tips, I would have fixed the door and stuff, but when I render a still frame it does not show, only in the video.
But THANKS for the feedback!
great job. i think the artifacts on the door are caused by doubles, or two objects sharing the same space. you must have accidentally duplicated the door.
the inside hatch isnt set on smooth. but all in all its nice i look forward to the finished product
thanks guys