Short spot animation

This is going on a website we’re working on. Crits and comments are welcome :slight_smile:

http://www.directo.it/rasta.mov

Thanks!

omg hahah thats great!

phew, cant really think of too much atm, maybe could anticipate the fall back a bit to give it a bit of waiting time of him like o_O.

top notch!

its great…
but i think he falls too fast…
and the ricochet when he falls is too big

that’s funny :P, the smoke is too dense though, imo.

You should try and make the cough a bit more intense / cartoony. eg. if his head goes back before he coughs.

And maybe the logo or title of the site to appear as everything calmes down.

Thanks for your replies :slight_smile:
Given the budget i doubt i will further work on this, but in the case your suggestions will be really usefull.
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