A little 2 day project I’ve been working on. Anything I could do to make it better?
Off the top of my head, the hand isn’t blurred at all when it should be blurred slightly due to being behind glass. The pole in the middle blocks and disrupts the form of the silhouette, which takes focus off of the main figure of the picture. The pose is too stiff and symmetrical when it should be loosened up to look more like how a real human would stand.