Hey i did just finished a very short animation. But I am not realy happy with it. Two reasons i don´t get the texturing look good. And for some reasons I do not get the secret of animation what is ist what would let i look more smooth and real.
I really look forward to hear any critiques. And learn a lot.
Nothing wrong with your edit but I would say some of your shots are badly framed and not easily “read”. The text overlay is a little distracting and breaks the overall chilling mood. Do you plan on taking this any further?