Thanks for the comments and critiques, please keep em comming!
Here’s a new rendering with some fixes:
It was done fairly quick although I spent quite a bit of time messing with the particle systems, the dust in the air makes it difficult to get a good looking laser!
NOLA-Jedi: Thanks, I tried to fix both of those although i still have some work to do on the tie fighter’s wing.
DVirus101: Do you know how to make DupliFrames clump? Well, I went a bit overboard with an explosion effect, it’s not very “star warsy” but I’ll fix it soon. Yes, all the tie fighters are the same, I guess the dust obstructs the view maybe.
I decided to keep the static particles for the tie fighter lasers because they are in the backgound and not very important (read: I was lazy and needed to finish a lab report).
Well, how does it look? What changes do you like and do you think I should undo? What further changes should I make?