I will hopefully make it into an entire scene. Please can I have feedback/suggestions. I stopped my last project because I wasn’t getting any replies so it would be nice to have some feedback on the latest image I put up.
you could reduce the size of the gear a little bit
add a piston in the front for stabilisation or height-varyation
add some kind of a small steamengin to drive the main gear (aint shure what it does/doesn’t fit).
also on the right you could add a steam-generator linked to the pipes.
Put the canons body up a bit, and add a gear left and one right, running in a gearring on the baseplate for steering to the left and right.
It looks a little odd with the main gear in like that. I’ld reduce the right front part, for it seems to be without funktion.
Nice boat too, but I’d put the main of the ropes to the front/back of the ballon and the boat for the reason of stability. And for steampunk-boats some kind of sailcloth - wings or sail - rudders are always nice.
Hi, I think it still lacks something, like details, cables or rust. And the depth of field blur is maybe too great in my opinion. Overall the gun looks a bit like a ‘toy’, maybe it’s the combination of what I mentionned.