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“Still Beating”
50% done
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Awesome work! The only thing Im not fan of is the text, i dont think it is required and is taking away some of its beauty.
Very nice composition and materials. And the image is appealing in a way.
I see a little steam but it looks more like smoke. The ice and snow would soak up the liquid more, I guess.
There is a nice contradiction between the glass/ice heart and the fact that is cut off on the one hand and the claim on the other hand. But it is also not easy to transport the idea with the image. At the moment it needs the claim to work imho, because I wouldn’t think of the glass heart as being able to beat. The blood is the connection between the heart and the claim. And a real heart would be off-putting. Maybe others have an idea how to transport the message without the claim in the snow.
Thank you guys! I really appreciate all your feedback. In my next image I’ll take your words into account. And about the text, I agree with you, but it’s a CD Cover the name should be present somewhere (not necessarily in the cover itself), so I’ll produce 2 versions, 1 with the text and 1 without it to see what turns out to be the best.
Sorry for any english mistakes.
Cheers! 