Strange monster!!!

Okay I am working on a monster:D, but I need a bit feedback.:eek::eek::eek:

Heh, nice! I like it. The head portion looks really cool, the arms, legs, feet, and hands are ok, but the body is just, well, really bad. It just doesn’t look right at all- it looks like somebody just slapped a body on him.

That’s all I have to say really. Keep it up! :smiley:

yeah. I know!! The body is fucking ugly, but I don’t know how I should change it. Ohh thats so difficult. Can you paint on my images or something and show me a example?

I’ll see if I can draw you something after I’m done studying ;)…

Heya Squir,

Nice work so far, I really dig the flat headed look you have, its a nice style!!! :smiley:

Only crit I can think is that since the head is so flat, the back of the head could possibly look better if it was rounded off. Like the flatness had pushed everything back in its growth.

As for the body, just model in a bit of definition, hint at muscle groups and folds. I personally think he would look good with a defined pot belly, that’d be cool!!! :smiley:

Keep up the good work mate!!!

Can you paint it on my image, how you want it?

Ok- this was literally a 5 minute deal, so don’t judge my art skills by this :P.

Anyway- I was thinking something maybe a bit more human shaped (body wise) [if you actually gave him pants, that’d be kick ass :P]…

And yeah- that’s a total shit drawing :P. And if you’re wondering why I didn’t just GIMP the damn thing- me+mouse=no.

ohh nice drawing:). No I don’t want him looking as a human. I want him like a strange sweet monster,but it was a nice try. thx a lot.

No other comments?

It kinda looks like this guy:

I tried to change the body. Do you think it is better or not?

give him some pecs, and a belly button…and man, pants would look great (if you could find a good denim image map).
and i would suggest a tail to balance out that huge head! :wink: