just a small project more to be added soon
just a pen i did nor model the things to any real life scale and im bad with proportions so so if anything is off let me know
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I think the key is too square-ish and those blue pill things look too small, other than that, it’s great!
I think the key is too square-ish and those blue pill things look too small, other than that, it’s great!
thanks jeepster ill make those pill a bit larger and edit or change the black part of the key key
kimani
here a new render.
phone and labels and writings soon
just a little about the scene
its the desk of some person who is attempting suicide that piece of paper is going top be his suicide note yep that it
some more crits or coments would be welcome
kimani
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What you have there tells me you have a pretty good handle on modelling and materials in Blender. Nice work on the modelling.
A couple of observations:
The cup and the pills are both too small, at least from what I’m used to seeing…
Materials (along with textures) and lighting make or break any render. The lighting really does not convey a depressing atmosphere. More dimly lit, yet visible, maybe a greenish-bluish tint to the light. Subtle use of light is imperitive.
About the key, unless it is for a lock the shaft of the the key is way too short. Look at a car key to see what I mean.
Lighting and materials need work.
Good work so far.
Thanks Soter, some very good observations you made there ill work on them as much as i can. it realy dose not have a sad mood to it,but ill try the tint and make it dimmer. thanks again and
i did this render to make up my mind about using the phone or not in the scene.im not going bother with the suicide mood im not good at lighting and i need find some good notes on lighting and read when i have the time, i thing just a normal office like lighting withought the sad mood would be easer and i need to finish this by Monday. some crits on lighting please i really want to know whats right or wrong so i can get it out of the way.
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Everything is looking pretty good so far solartic, you seem to have a good grip on modeling. As for crits, I think the pills could use a bit more detail, maybe some numbers or a name brand. Also, the key looks a bit strange, what kinda key were you intending it to be?
Thanks ven0msevenx ill add some more details to the pill. its a car key im going to rebuild the shaft i just haven’t gotten to it yet, touching up the phone currently. i see u did not crit lighting so im guessing its ok(im hoping).
new render if there art any major error with this then my next update should be to the finish projects
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this has really improved since first post. however there seems to be a lack of shadow - beef up the shadows