Student Film Title Animation

I’m currently in a student film course called Cinema Production 2. This is the title animation I made for the film, maybe to be used in a trailer for it or something, but I wanted to get your guys’ opinion! The film is called “Hack Jobs.”

Pretty basic. I have the letters pass through an edge light, so that’s why the edges suddenly become well lit when they stop. I’m not sure if I should hide it with a giant lens flare or something from the middle, but I’ll keep looking into it. Props to Andrew Price’s logo animation for the idea of the shine wipe at the end.