"Studio" jingle / intro

Hi there,

During the last months I have been tinkering and working on an intro jingle for my films and I think I’m getting somewhere. However, for some applications, the jingle is still way too long and too “dramatic” as the video below illustrates. I do intend to keep the 10 sec “dramatic” version because sometimes I do stuff to which it fits, but for now, I’m looking for some ideas how to change it into something more “generally” fitting, i.e. shorter and less “dramatic” while still keeping the whole logo concept.

Grateful for any comments!

-Stefan


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