ok, third and last try at a scene for the blender world cup.
since i posted this in ‘Focused Critique’ i expect hard criticism from you guys.
the image isn’t finished yet, i didn’t even textured it, but i would like to hear comments about the scene (if it’s clear enough what’s going on, etc.), about the nodes (if i didn’t blowed it up too much), and other stuff you can see
That’s a really good image, it’s powerful. It would be even more creepy if you modeled an actual anatomically correct heart and put it there. Although it might be a bit too bloody then.
You should try to texture it, maybe just subtly. Good luck!
nice
the light especially on the sheet of paper is good, not every letter can be read ad-hoc cause the light´s shining very bright on the left side, so this part of the scene is very interesting.
scene is very dramatic, fits well in the contest, allthough the heart looks more like a liver romantic
I thought that the thing on the table was like a beret or something. The overall image is really cool and has a great look to it, but that red thing needs some work, especially if it is supposed to be a heart.
I took note of all your nice comments and implemented them in the image…
It didn’t even suffer under it!
‘Am I done?’ is my question.
@psytr0ll : I know you didn’t mean that the text should be readable but i thought it would be better this way.
If there’s text in an image the interest of the viewer automatically focuses on that, so…
Maybe a little blood trickling from the “heart”?,Ooh, or what about like a shoebox with a dark stain on one end trickling blood across the table (as if the real heart’s inside)? Yuck, that freaks me out. Probably not what you were going for…
It’s finished.
I’ll post it as a finished project.
@PneumaPilot: still can’t see it’s a heart? anyway, i think your idea would be more creepy and even less clear to viewers so I won’t make that shoebox
though i did add a little puddle of blood.