sunset beach scene

Artwork Works in Progress
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this is a simple beach scene i did.

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/3103/samissupriseku0.th.jpg

what do you think?

2

I would try a different texture on the sand; it looks too smooth. Unless of course you were going for that look…

3

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/3103/samissupriseku0.th.jpg

thanks Heely joe, i fixed the sand
C&C welcome

4

Well, on closer inspection, it looks like your flowers are not in a container. So again, unless you wanted it to be that way, a vase might be nice. I don’t know how much it would intrude though…

EDIT: Forgot to mention, I the sand looks a lot better.

5

i purposely didnt put a vase in, i dont know why though.
ill put a vase in and see what it looks like.
thanks:]
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/3103/samissupriseku0.th.jpg
ok i put i vase in, better? worse?
all c&c welcome

6

Those chairs usually have planks for the seats also, but you have them as solid pice…

7

i tryed with planks and without planks and i prefered it without planks.

8

I like it better with the vase.

Also, if you don’t want planks, at least consider extruding it up, as it looks like it has no depth right now.

9

i fixed the chairs

http://img476.imageshack.us/img476/350/samissupriseya7.th.jpg

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any thoughts?

11

i dont like the color of the water its kind of greenish.

12

i belive that because the water itself is blue but there is a yellow-orange light on it.

13

SHADOWS!

Is your RAY button hit in the render panel? Do you have AO on? Both of these would help tremendously.

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thanks for the tip ill try it as soon as i can