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Well nice work. Glad you’ve finished it. I hope you’ve learned alot whilst making it. I enjoyed it, for the most part the tempo and pacing were fine. I laughed out loud when the bird crashed. Now on to some criticism. Some of the modeling is a bit rough in areas but after reviewing your site, very similar to your drawing style, so perhaps when your drawing improves so will your modeling, or vise versa. Visualizing depth could be the area you should focus on. A lack of texturing on most objects gives it a generic 3d look. The animation is not bad for someone who isn’t an animator in specific, I would suggest using reference and following closely, noticing the timing and spacing of each action (don’t forget about anticipation before an action.) Your camera work is nice and I followed along well. Some technical glitches like some weird texture movement on a planet and your grass grid can be seen.
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