My second full piece using Yafaray (as I have been neglecting to make the Beta switch as of yet!) Please feel free to offer any pointers or advise… always welcome!

Thank you for your comments!



super modelling and texturing, lighting is also good, but composition could be much better, we don’t see at all what she’s looking at, it’s like it misses the right half of the image

You can exagerate on the glow in the front part of her body and improve the right side of the image so it is visually related to the light the character is getting.