TGV Fluoo

Hello. After more than 3 weeks TGV is DONE :smiley:

Here:
http://www.moobins.com/smietnik/images/tgvdone.jpg

What do you think?

If you want to see its WIP, click:
https://blenderartists.org/forum/viewtopic.php?t=57220&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=45

Musisz jeszcze poćwiczyć modelowanie subsurfami, ale pomysł u kompozycja bardzo fajowe. :slight_smile:

In english:
You have to practice subsurf modeling more, but i like the concept and making. :slight_smile:

Very good concept and modelling. But besides what was said in 2 languages, I’d say that texture needs more improvement specially glass texture.

Another remark: the wheels seem not to be on the rails (?)

May be if you add some motion blur, the effect will be great ! :slight_smile:

good stuff, but try for shadows and contrast next time :wink:

Tats how trains work big wheels on the inside, small ones on the outside to keep it from comming off.

Tats how trains work big wheels on the inside, small ones on the outside to keep it from comming off.[/quote]

I guess that you misunderstood me, to illustrate what I meant take a look at this :

http://www.kando.hu/palyazat/erasmus/hallgato/kinti/franciaorszag/Erasmus-Lille/Erasmus-Lille/fotok/TGV.jpg

thanks anyway.

Yeah, maybe wrong proportions, but in good way. maybe i’ll fix :slight_smile:

whoa composition perfect! very nice on the eyes, great render, and theres nothing better then an oppertunity for the awesome halo fun!

congrats!

Lee

Not bad for a beginner. Looks cool!