After some small tips this is what my image turned into mind you this is only the second blender file ive ever made please honest opinions
Hmm, very nice, no noise or “white dots” here :). Keep Going, and check out some introductory tutorials at Blendercookie, to wrap yourself up around the blender way of working. The tutorials there are really good. If you can, look for the training series released there, from modeling to compositing. And Buy yourself a book if you can for references. I would suggest The blender foundations the essential guide to learning blender and Blender for dummies 2nd edition and ofcourse keep checking the online wiki, handy for quick references. And keep blending !