The Arc - abstract

Something I’ve been meaning to make for some time. I tried to give it more of a stretched look by increasing lens angle.

Not bad … interesting design. But there is no strong points in this image. I’m not sure, but I think you should play with composition and/or point of view more. Or add something to it. Maybe other simple objects. Arc is a very dynamic figure and i can’t see this strong dynamic in this image ;] I mean , it’s “weak”. Good luck!

Thanks :slight_smile: Can’t say I fully get what you mean though? Could you rephrase it/dumb it down? :confused:

It looks like one of those monolithic things you find when wandering in a vast open ended plane of nothingness.

Some of the light and dark areas don’t play well together, it could look more dynamic and less in the way of harsh contrast.

That’s exactly how I had imagined it when I started to make it. :slight_smile:
Here’s my updated version with tonnes more samples.