This is me(NEW Character&armature dl@page 5)

Excellent. Love the way it progressed, also the way the character always seems to be looking at you as it progressed getting more complete. I also like the scene. My only suggestion is change the color of the fishing pole some it fades into the background so much that I missed it at first and wondered what those 2 white things hanging in space were. :slight_smile: maybe just lighten the pole up a bit more. Still excellent.
Paradox

This gets better and better with every post Poju. Also, you have progressed a lot from you first postings.

Keep up the great work and good luck in the CG Talk challenge. You will have my vote.

BgDM

Thankā€™s

I think that when i make line from reel to bucket it shows little better that rod exists, but good call.

Here is little update.

http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/toon/ma20.jpg

:o :o :o
Wonderfull, really expressive :slight_smile:

Stefano

And here is little more for ya

http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/toon/ma24.jpg

Very good work, Poju!

I would only make one modification. The shadows under the objects (non illuminated areas) are to dark. Put a gray light (point light) under the entire scene to simulate the light reflection of the ground in the objects. Maybe you should try some colored lights with small intensity values. This way it would look more realistic.

I made an example.

http://www.gudi3d.kit.net/lightexample.jpg

If the image donā€™t show up, look at this link:

http://www.gudi3d.kit.net/lightexample.jpg

Looking better and better Poju. I agree with gudi3d. Place a lamp underneath everything at about a 0.3 to 0.5 intensity. Will make things look a little better.

Great stuff.

BgDM

nice model! good job

Thankā€™s i throwed lamp there, but still needs tweaking tho.

Here is current state:

http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/toon/ma25.jpg

I liked it better without a background. IMHO

Martin

I think lights still need some adjustments.

And I agree with theeth. The background need some improvements. I just canā€™t figure out what it is.

Yep i tought that background lack something, but what that is da question?
Well i desided to make something little different and it would be nice if ya tell me do you like it and how to make it better.

http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/toon/ma26.jpg

Sorry if iā€™m more confucing than usual, i got some temperature(38.8C), but luckily it does good for imagination :smiley:

Hi Poju. Nice work. The deformations seem really good, and the seems in the pants are very nice. great expression too.
the background is fun. it looks artificial, i.e. like a hollywood set, esp with the lighting you have on the char. I donā€™t think you should change it though- its a really cool feel. If anything, you could accentuate it, by having a few props lying around, maybe a boom mike dangling from the ā€˜ceilingā€™?
the char has sortoff a cassanova expression to him, so it might work.

The watwer level of the sea/ocean seems to be too high IMO. The perspective looks off. Other than that, maybe make a lantern to show the light source from the right side. Now it just seems off without a visual light source there.

Great work. Keep 'em coming.

BgDM

Cool. Did you use reflection for the water to reflect the moon light? Maby you should make a campfire to show where the yellow light is comming from, with marsmellows :wink:

Thanks for kind words everyone. I made some changes and made it better i hope. There is few too dark spots(examble between legs), but i hope i get rid of them somehow. Anyway here is what i got now:

http://members.surfeu.fi/tero.konttila/toon/ma27.jpg

Wow, nice !

You look like Rincewindā€¦

Looking really good! CanĀ“t reallt come up with some crits except that I by some reason donĀ“t like the camera being so lowā€¦ Maybe move it up a bit?

The last one is my favorite one so far. Well done.
Paradox

Head off. nice work, go on I like the shadows and lightning :slight_smile: