This is an animation I’ve been working on for my reel that is coming together fairly quickly. The main point is that you can do anything you put your mind to, and it’s supposed to be very motivating.
When he is running some of the fat moves and not the shorts at all so it looks very odd… Also I am sure you are probably aware of seeing his shoes, I wasn’t sure if we were looking down his “baggy” shirt or a problem with the mesh?
Quite well done although a few areas could be fixed up quite a bit more…
Jiggling fat is what you’re missing. Also maybe a little bit less pronounced SSS? It’s cute, though. 
agreed! 