This is my latest work, i still need to do a lot of stuff but im on may way
What you guys think.
Hi! Good start!
i like the line quality where is fades in and out - cool idea!
One suggestion I have is that the shading on the face is a bit extreme - it feels a bit distracting. One thing you always want to try and achieve with your characters is clarity of thought and emotion. I often find that when there are a lot of shadows crossing the face, it becomes difficult for the audience to read the expression within a few frames. So for clarity, it would be a good idea to simplify the shading in the face, or reduce its complexity.