Toon Shade

Hey again guys.
This time i have been experimenting with the toon shade, this are the example that i have tell me what do you think?
I think i will use this style more often since i was planning to learn some animation and since this render really quick and looks cool i think it will be the better choice.

For the first image I can’t tell what’s the chin or the mouth, making it hard to read. Although the second image has more readability to it.

First line is the mouth. Second Line is the chin.