keithian
(keithian)
2
nice,
like the stripes, looks like a cool sub-universe ( sorry but not like rain ).
scene and lights are well.
cu kethian
thor
(thor)
3
The gate on the top picture is too red, compared with the almost black background.
The rain looks a bit weird, it’s made out of rectangles rather than raindrops.
The bottom pic looks great, no criticisms!
Good work.
keithian said: like the stripes
Haha it’s bamboo.
thor said: The rain looks a bit weird, it’s made out of rectangles rather than raindrops.
Hmm yea maybe it needs more motion blur. By the way the top one
is just a particle system while the bottom is two particle systems with
mblur.
thanks for the comments/crits
arnaud0
(arnaud0)
5
I concur with this assessment, and join to congratulate you on the 2 bottom pictures. They are great. Did you use a script for the cubes?
Arnaud