Ok it look worst than the original I dont know why…
The tower itself looks a bit “empty” to me, as in all of the balconies look exactly the same. People usually have some chairs, some (hanging) plants, lighting etc. set up there that distinguishes them. Also the walls like a little bit thin to me to hold up such a structure, but I am no architect so who knows. I like the depth of field that you have with the car, although I am curious to see whether without something so close in the foreground, you can actually create a better image by providing a far horizon behind the tower.
Thank You for the coments I hope to keep them on mind.