Hey all -
looking for some feedback on my latest project. Based off some concept art my friend drew - this is a mini-bust of a sci-fi trooper guy. I’m specifically looking for comments on proportion, modelling and lighting, although I’ll listen to pretty much anything you have to offer.
thanks!
-Brian
Proportions seems to be correct.
Modelling well done, i think.
Light reflections are nice.
Would like few scratshes and some dirt on it,
i think it would make it look cooler.
The arms are not long enough, they should be long enough for his close fists to reach mid-thigh.
ex:
^^^ agreed, and the shoulder joints are waaaay skinny
Head’s to big, Nice materials. The squares on the breastplate looks strange, why are they there?
Update:
thanks for the example image zog34. fixed up the proportions. Will work on materials and perfecting lighting next.
You might consider the bredth of his shoulders as well. I suggest looking at some clone troopers circa Ep II. The might give you some insight as to how to put the armor on him correctly. Right now he looks a little squeezed.
But it looks good!
-aML