What do you want to achieve with this? It’s hard to critique when you give no context, so I have to guess.
I’m assuming you made a graphic to sell this design or to sell this product to consumers. It comes across as “brutal” (in art terms) and masculine because of the extreme perspective. Consider using a flatter zoom that will be closer to how humans would see it in real life. sorry my terminology isn’t that good. I would make a render with the product in it’s use scenario (on clothing) so the buyer will get an idea of what it will look like on their clothes. Take a look at how cuff link are normally advertised for reference.