I made this ad for ubuntu linux. I just love the OS. The idea is that one person changes the thinking of the others and they are Free to think clearly using Ubuntu. C&C’s welcome.
Don.
Don.
i love the idea and presentation. Well done.
i like the animation and concept. maybe a little visual ‘ping’ as each circle is touched by the rotating ball.
also, the layout at the end needs some tightening up. what i’m attaching is only a suggestion. work on alignments and size relationships.
it might be a good idea to consult Ubuntu about a style guide to make sure your usage of the Ubuntu logo is consistent with what they’ve been putting out.
I’m not sure I would put the emphasis on ‘your’, as it sounds confrontational/accusatory. Perhaps the emphasis should be on ‘change’.
I agree with troutmask…
Yeah, that’d definitely sweeten the deal a little. Nice concept though, good execution so far.