Hi,
I’m student, it’s my first animation on Blender, I produce and direct a 3D movie for present a contest game Unlimitedrink Reload
For your first Blender project, this is nice work!
Are you looking for critique, or is this done?
Vraiment tres bien pour une premiere animation avec blender!
You are a student, in which field? 3d General, animation, production? it’s really cool that you used blender for this contest!
congrats.
And yes, if you are looking for some good critiques, Freen has a really good eye! 
Mathias.
Thanks you Freen.
I am open for all critique if you want 
It’s good for my progress
Merci beaucoup mathiasA.
Last year I was student in filmmaker / motion design. But now, is 3d general (other soft but I prefere work on Blender)
Nice one. That attitude will get you far.
In general, you could put more work into matching the colour of your 3d with your footage. This is a delicate thing to manage, but in general it looks like the can is darker than it should be.
Also the can looks a little too perfect and clean, which also makes it stick out from the background.
In terms of your animation, there’s some nice stuff there, but the weight is a little off in some of it. This is most obvious in the jumps, which lack anticipation and squash and stretch.
The run also lacks side to side motion as the can jumps from one foot to the other. Also, a bit more up and down could help show the weight. This is most obvious in the shot at about 0:43 when you see them all running from behind.
For the closeup shot, adding some blinks would really help bring the can to life, especially on the head turns. Some sudden eye darts would also make him look more nervous.
All up, this is great for your first effort!
Thank you for your critique 