Here’s the ugly crap:
I outa kick your ass for even saying that 
Textures and coloring seems a little monochromatic, but the modeling is nice and clean
Awesome work Dittohead.
I’m not judging this by just this particular render - the angle, lighting, materials, and most of all the modeling are all very well done regardless of how motion blur is accepted or not. Your talent and artistry do shine through.
And Exodus will surely rock 
/me should get back to work on that 
RobertT
What the heck is exodus, anyway? Is that X-Warrior’s project or something?
Something to that effect, yes. 
Awesome! :o
About the composition: My eyes are drawn to the fighter’s cockpit, but hey, where else should they be drawn to? I don’t really understand the problem here. The fighter (interceptor) is the object of the scene, eyes focus on it, so, what’s the problem?