Well I’m entering the WC. There will be “dreams” coming down from the sky and entering windows. Not very far yet. I decided to go for B/W cause colour is too much work.
Just fishing for some CC.
WeWa
The streetlights are an unfamiliar shape, keeping me from identifying them immediately. Perhaps if a slight curve beneath them (the glass) emitted light, it would be clearer.
I like the idea of what you’re trying to do, but a different selection of elements (like the details at the top of the lower building) might be in order. I like what you did with the electrical cabling.
I’m not quite sure about this POV, and of this business of having one bedroom so close-to-camera with its side completely off. When the “dreams” are inserted, it might be possible to re-evaluate the camera’s point-of-view. Pasting a nighttime sky-shot, perhaps with a moon, on the backdrop might be a nice try.
But I like very much the idea of B&W. To me it’s not a cop-out. Nighttime really is a black-and-white world, and if the dream elements are colorful it will really make a striking picture.
i would like to see the purpose of it before some c&c.
“what dreams may come”, eh?
Sundial - Great idea. Hadn’t thought of the Coloured dreams yet. I just finished the Cloud/Moon combination you speak of I already had that planned. I’ll looking into the lighting.
Nathan - I have a sketch sitting next to me but I lack a scanner. You should be able to get the idea soon enough though.
http://www.angelfire.com/empire/wewa_juicyburger/images/Dream1.05.jpg [copy/paste] it’s the same image as the above, just incase it really doesn’t work. [/edit]
I’m not quite satisfied with the moon&clouds yet so they may still change.
I’m working on the dreams now.
I think you may have just run out of bandwidth. I’m just seeing little red Xs.
After a lot of fiddleing I think i am finally on to something.
CC? I’m still working on the background.
WeWa
i really think you should make the “dreams” thingy a little more transparent.
otherwise, i can see that it is going well.
it’ll be interesting to see how it turns out.
hih
nate
http://wewa.intrr.org/Dream1.09.jpg
I’m getting there. i hope this clarifies the image a little.
WeWa