WC70WIP- please, need C&C (update 2 at bottom)

hey, once you work on something enough, you lose the ability to look at it objectively, please tell me what needs improving, its not even close to done, but please be harsh!

http://hometown.aol.com/imaheratic/myhomepage/wc70wip2.jpg?mtbrand=AOL_US

http://hometown.aol.com/imaheratic/myhomepage/wc70wip1.jpg?mtbrand=AOL_US

its gonna have a dead body laying on the guillotene, sooner or later[/img]

Hmmm…how about some stonework on the pillars. Also use a spotlight, 'cause it needs shadows. <<edit>> cobblestones would be good too. <<edit>> i just realized I have a texture that would look killer on the platform. I’ll put up a zip, and you can check it out.

Ok here is the wood tex:
http://home.att.net/~yorik/DangerBoy/wood4a.zip

I’m liking the modeling, and the textures are ok, even if a little blurry (change them if you can). What is that black thing, anyway?

I’m looking foward to seeing that scene lighted, and with more objects around (like tables and garbage).

thanx, modron, i really like that texture, u dont mind if i use it do you? i hope not, thats y u gave it to me! yea, idk y its so blurry, but i cant help it, im changing them, the black thing is like a chick, crying cause her guy just got his head chopped off, well, earlier, shes been there a while.
yea it def. neads shadows, totally forgot! umm… anything else?

you are quite welcome. i believe it is a ‘doom’ texture

heres maybe the final update, i kno its big… but yea, just save it and veiw it at ur screen reso if its too big, please be harsh, i dont really like it, but i cant figure out how to make it better

http://hometown.aol.com/imaheratic/myhomepage/profile.html

http://hometown.aol.com/imaheratic/myhomepage/wc70wip4.jpg?mtbrand=AOL_US

wut? nobody has anything creative to say?

well I might say something,…but I can only see a quarter of it at a time because it is so HUGE! :stuck_out_tongue: Holy cow man! That is one colosal render! [!]

argh, yea i kno. i dont like it any smaller cause you cant see the fine details,but then agian, its jpeg hah, i really liked that tex!

You should post a link to it instead of putting the image in the thread. It’s really big. %|

check it out skeletor. i have synchronized my avatar w yours. hehe!

yea, i guess its kinda big :stuck_out_tongue: , i posted the URL also, but yea…

well heres a somewhat smaller one!

http://hometown.aol.com/imaheratic/myhomepage/cat.html

STOP BLINKING PEOPLE!
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