I did the bottom part of mouth, still need to add a toung, the things on the side make me wonder if thei should be there… should they, what do you think?
It is nice to see that you work again… is that a pokemon?
The first pic look nice, but the second… you have right, the mouth is bad and also the texturing (or wait…, the lighting make this bad white shinig in the upper part of the head…?). Anyway you should change the mouth, or not but then looks similar like a chine dragon mask (but if you that want (a mask) you should turn off the subsurfs and make the head shorter… and create a longe body like a snake)
Fobos its not pokemon lol!!! I am using no reference though I am needing it not because the mouth is really bad… anyways I added actrally texture and killed the toon style for now also took the ear thingy off…
p.s. I am really doing an anime tut, just taking a long ass time cause i am making it for newbies to blender as well