White Out!

On guard!!! This is a little stupid but hey…I’m amuzed. My origional idea was to have him fighting a snake-like pen on a desktop. I was inspired by the latest WC: Light vs. dark/white-out vs. ink, get it?

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questions? comments?

I dont know if this is a test or what, but I have several crits to a pretty good work so far.

The logo is too thick, it looks more like thick paper wrapped around it, thatn actually a thin piece glued on like most logos.

If possible turn up the samples on AO, and if your using random sampling turn it off, to get a less noisy render.

Consider adding a gob of white out or crust around the end of the brush where it meets the stick. The detail on that brush is really good and should be seen, so if you decide to add it, don’t try and impede that showing.

Good work. Nice idea.

Nice job. Basicly what MusicMan said, up the number of AO samples, add some withe out on the brush, But you should also add some dried up white out at the edge of the bottle mouth and on the edge of the cap that covers the bottle mouth. Then it will look much more realistic.

Oh, one more thing. Add some white out on the shaft of the brush.

Nice work!! 8) 8)

Hey thanks guys! I don’t know how long this’ll be a WIP…like ALL my projects, but we’ll see!

LOL! This is absolutely hilarious!