So this is a work in progress of a tipical afternoon, having wine with a girl
i haven’t worked the lighting yet to look like an afternoon, or anything, i’m just getting the elements and materials there, i want some feedback if anyone has
very grateful !
so based in the comments i added some of the stuff, the others will do tomorrow i hope.
Moved the picture in the back a bit, added a bit more depth of field, just enough not to over do it.
improved the wooden thingy that holds the cheese.
Added bump to the wall.
Modeled the top of a chair and added it in between the table and wall to give sense of depth, and the feeling that there was someone sitting just next to the scene, and that she’s not sitting there anymore.
Changed the ashtray material to glass, and added dark stains inside that don’t really show much, but they are there…
Added a 2 dripping marks to the wine bottle on top, plus the metalic pieces typical when you open a bottle and you’re clumsy and didn’t take the whole metal thing off…
Changed one of the light emitters so it feels a bit more like a window. (the right one).
Added stain to the cork.
A few more details improved:
-wood chair patter rotated,
-picture framing fixed, added separation from the picture to the base paper so it has a bit shadow,
-added lipstick to one of the glasses.
-fixed normals on ashtray (now it looks like it should).
-make the knife a bit dirty.
-add fingerprints to glass and probably bottle too.
-improve cheese shader.
-add stain of wine next to the cork.
-maybe some kind of cloth?.. i mean napkins or a typical cooking cloth…
That’s it for now, anyone got any more ideas on what to improve?
Thanks again in advance!