WIP - 11 second november '12 competition - let me know what you think of it :)

Hi all,

i was thinking to enter in this month’s competition, day before yesterday i posted this one

i did not like it that much & was suggested to put some deviousness on mancandy’s face :confused: & now i’v overdone it :(, here it is -

Please let me know your opinion.
Oh btw now i’m working on tone it down a bit.

thanks a lot in advance
bye
dee