Wip: A Real Effort (yes a girl!)

Current time 1 hour
My reference:
http://img63.exs.cx/img63/397/camp1505sv.th.jpg
Work in progess
http://img115.exs.cx/img115/6637/kayreal8yj.jpg

From that same image I drew what I saw in it… (5 min drawing)
http://img115.exs.cx/img115/7267/kayquick0jv.th.jpg
just wanted to show you how far off some of my drawings really get.

hmm… something strange with the left eye, on the second drawing. also I didn’t quite get what that drawing has to do with the reference?

on first image you have a little work to do on the mouth+nose area… and… wlel, I dont know to what style you are heading for, but maybe a bit more shading, and less lines.

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Yeah, the mouth looks kinda pasted on…
Keep working at it!

+30 more mins… After I finish the rough shading Ill blur/smooth it out
http://img63.exs.cx/img63/397/camp1505sv.th.jpghttp://img101.exs.cx/img101/8992/kayreal20oh.th.jpg

The reason for the crappy drag @ the buttom was to let you know that sometimes I look at things and I go way off from the image I got the idea from. I might see a pose of a girl and it just turns into a hand of a guy who in a totally diferent pose…

All thats left is the shading…
http://img63.exs.cx/img63/397/camp1505sv.th.jpghttp://img157.exs.cx/img157/9823/kayreal39xn.th.jpg

Nice work. You’re definitely getting it. Here are some critiques to help you out:

The mouth is too far down on the face and/or the chin isn’t low enough.
The head in the drawing isn’t tilted enough.
I think the eyes are too large.