WIP BAC#2 : Kiopaa's

I started my animation for the challenge. For now, it’s just some poses without timing.
(click the image)
http://blenderclan.tuxfamily.org/html/uploads/img4989adfac1fbe.jpg
Kiopaa

It’s simple and works well. Maybe on your fourth pose, the character should be closer to the platform?
I don’t know.
Thanks for the rig, too, it’s great to play with it.

Looking good.

This is going to be a pretty fun challenge to see the entries for.

Looking good except for the twining. You have both arms and legs in the same poses constantly. It really loses appeal and reality when you do that. Try adjusting at least one side of the body to be different.

I found some time to work on my anim.
video
I don’t know what to do to improve my work, could you help me ?

You’re nearly there. I guess that the head shouldn’t point towards the platform at Frame 185. You should keep your body straight from Frame 180 to Frame 190. And, like thedaemon said, generally your poses should be more asymmetric, to convey a more natural feeling.

Thank you bupla for your feedback.

Here is my new video (click on the picture)
http://blenderclan.tuxfamily.org/html/uploads/img499fb3622b7db.jpg