First drawing I post in…ages!
the drawing:
http://www.geocities.com/cpcativo/skimg/61604.jpg
the concept:
http://www.geocities.com/cpcativo/skimg/61604ins.jpg
Update1:
http://www.geocities.com/cpcativo/skimg/61804ins.jpg
Copy & paste or go here:
http://www.geocities.com/cpcativo/sketch.htm
Any C&C welcome!
Interesting!
Your drawing style looks like it belongs to someone decently proficient with drawing such caricatures. The major issue I have with both has to do with proportions; the most noticeable problems are the oversized heads. Even with the angle and perspective, the girls’ heads still seem to be too big, especially in the second drawing. Additionally, the waist draws in too sharply. You seem to want to give viewers a sense that the girl is in shape and “sexy”, at least in terms of her body. Right now it just looks somewhat awkward.
Some comments on her left hand (our right) in the first one – I see that it’s closer to us than the rest of her, but it’s not conveyed effectively. Her hand looks somewhat manly, and I think this is due to the thickness of her fingers. The lines that form the inner outline of her fingers are a bit too curved – perhaps straighten them slightly to make them look thinner, more pointed, and thus more feminine. I’m not sure what to make of the lines in her arm marking her muscles. I don’t believe one sees that (or at least, I’m not seeing any in my arm, and I’m twisting it in all sorts of strange way :D)
Otherwise, great pose. I can get a sense of the dynamics of the drawing. Her bangs are not following the breeze suggested by her flying headband – perhaps you should add some uniformity there.
I like how you conveyed the folds of the clothing. Very accurate and natural.
Thanks for the reply!
Your drawing style looks like it belongs to someone decently proficient with drawing such caricatures
please call it manga/anime
The major issue I have with both has to do with proportions; the most noticeable problems are the oversized heads
I’ve always had that problem(or I could call it my style):http://www.geocities.com/cpcativo/MIC1.jpgC&P.
You seem to want to give viewers a sense that the girl is in shape and “sexy”, at least in terms of her body.
I was going for the slim/athletic look…
Some comments on her left hand (our right) in the first one – I see that it’s closer to us than the rest of her, but it’s not conveyed effectively. Her hand looks somewhat manly, and I think this is due to the thickness of her fingers. The lines that form the inner outline of her fingers are a bit too curved – perhaps straighten them slightly to make them look thinner, more pointed, and thus more feminine.
I’ll try to “fix” it…
I’m not sure what to make of the lines in her arm marking her muscles. I don’t believe one sees that (or at least, I’m not seeing any in my arm, and I’m twisting it in all sorts of strange way )
I think I’ll use “my style” card again ;p
Her bangs are not following the breeze suggested by her flying headband – perhaps you should add some uniformity there.
I think of her as runnig, coming around a corner to suddenly stop in amazement(?)/suprise(her hair and band still going forward); but I see the hair needs better refinement…
I like how you conveyed the folds of the clothing. Very accurate and natural.
Thank you!
Here’s some stuff that’s not going anywhere…
http://www.geocities.com/cpcativo/skimg/sk1.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/cpcativo/skimg/sk2.jpg
