Not seeing any reflections off of the monitor screen. Even if the screens are somewhat diffuse (mine is quite glossy actually), you will see some reflections, especially the near one as it is at a high angle relative to the camera. Try using a layer weight mix to add the reflectivity that is missing. If you’re already doing that, crank it up a bit.
Maybe a tad too much DOF for my taste. Also, I’m not sure what the focus is on here; maybe put the monitors or keyboard in focus?
Not seeing too much else to criticize; I like the setting, background, lens flare, etc. Nice work.