iirc, you’re a photographer, right? so if it were possible to take a picture of these people in your studio, would you arrange them and the shot this way? I would put your main character focal point centered more, and do something in the shot to draw them together. Right now it looks to me like three different, disjoint ideas. just imho.
what do you mean by iirc ? , this can have a lot of meanings … <embarresed> .
what do you think of this new sketch ?
surely this goes against the spirit and rules of the competition
i have PMed alltaken and he gave me the OK .
There doesn’t seem to be any sort of focal point,
can you evaluate the new sketch please ? …
just being honest.
i like honest people , thanks :yes: …
looks good so far.
i have to ask , is the models quality good ?